oooo thanks a lot for the feedback!Thanks for the chapter!
Typos & edit suggestions: @roppatsu
- p2 You submit that work in yet? -> You submit that work yet? // You hand that work in yet?
- p5 Going up there too much lately lol -> Going up there too much lately lol. // Going up there too much lately, lol.
- p7 Tomo-rrow -> Tomor-row
- p7 Aun...ti... -> Aun...tie...
- p15 Theere there -> Theere, there // There, there
- p16 american shorthair -> American shorthair
- p17 american shorthair -> American shorthair
- p18 american shorthair -> American shorthair
- p22 english phrase -> English phrase
Happy to help, as always. Though re: submitting the edits, page 15 with its "Theere there" appears unchanged for me.oooo thanks a lot for the feedback!
Helps me a lot when someone gives me feedback like this. Thankies fisheries!
- p15 Fixed the comma; also, the first "there" was supposed to be elongated, but maybe it looked weird with just 2 e's. Added a tilde (Thee~re) to indicate that it's supposed to be a longer sound
I promise I actually submitted the edit this time too
FFUUUUUUCCCKKKK i mean fixed thank youHappy to help, as always. Though re: submitting the edits, page 15 with its "Theere there" appears unchanged for me.
oops, fixed. thank youGreat translation! just a heads-up, page 5 is duplicated and page 6 is missing, had to double-check with the reddit version.