Looking over it again, whats with the horde of untranslated terms on this one. Off the top of my head Omiso shiru, meshiagare, Shouyu.... all of them related to food in some way too.
Please for gods sake translate the Goshisou-sama and Meshiagare. Also, what's with the [] whenever the title or name of a person mentioned, Imouto, Ani, Ane, etc.. should all have been transkated into a suitable english counterpart @SquigglesJP
Thanks for series
Some fixes too:
Pg32 "Since you forget" to "Since you forgot"
Pg33 "Bas-ketball" looks better as "Basket-ball"