Shitai Katsugi no Nemu - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Kidnapped Bride

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I hate the guy, first he forces to team with her and now he wants to give advice on how to do her job, come on its not her first time doing her job.


hes just the annoying character that that give the moral advice and gives some selfdiscovey to the protagonist
 
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"Let's elope, it'll be fine!" :wooow:
"Let's go through the dungeon, it'll be fine!" :worry:
"Let's chat casually while walking unarmed (and unarmored) through the dungeon, it'll be fine!" :notlikethis:

The power of love only gets you so far...
 
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I get what they are going for with the guy, he is going to be the bridge between her and humanity so she can see that there are things to live for despite working such a bleak job and hated by everyone else. But he could probably be written to be doing that in a slightly less annoying way, so hopefully as it goes on he settles into a more human role instead of just the whacky opposite to the stoic character
 

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I get what they are going for with the guy, he is going to be the bridge between her and humanity so she can see that there are things to live for despite working such a bleak job and hated by everyone else.
You also need someone to explain WTF is going on.

I'd prefer if their genders were switched though.
 
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That ring is getting snatched the second someone else comes across the body, but it's a kind gesture nonetheless.
The ring probably will ended up as cursed item, the kind where it goes haunt the new owner and will kill you unless you reunites it with his dead lover's ring.

But that's no concern of our protagonist!
 
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So, what's the dude function here? Being annoying? Well, he makes a very well done job doing it. Like, dude, if you don't wanna both of them to get separated then you piggyback the other corpse! Like you're a man, lend a hand!
Could he develop into more than just story driver and the sentimental moral compass for the readers?
 
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So, what's the dude function here? Being annoying? Well, he makes a very well done job doing it. Like, dude, if you don't wanna both of them to get separated then you piggyback the other corpse! Like you're a man, lend a hand!
Could he develop into more than just story driver and the sentimental moral compass for the readers?
Garensis is a naive up start with a lot of heart, but no real experience. Over time he'll probably learn more about Nemu and Nemu will expound on her philosophy about what it means to be a corpse bearer and how to honor the dead, while he provides a little spark and flavor to her life.

It'll be interesting to see whether or not Garensis will come to respect and adopt Nemu's outlook or reject it and discover a new outlook to contrast it.

Also they decided to leave the husband's body behind with only the ring because that was all they could do to keep him and the bride together in anyway. If he had been brought back the rings would have been taken from his corpse and he wouldve been dumped in a shallow, unnamed grave befitting a "criminal". Bringing them back to the parents together was never an option.
 
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He's gonna get someone killed most probably himself eventually. Unless by some plot armor or ex machina (which obviously will be the case). Hate these characters, that are just plain dumb and stupid for narrative.
 
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Garensis is a naive up start with a lot of heart, but no real experience. Over time he'll probably learn more about Nemu and Nemu will expound on her philosophy about what it means to be a corpse bearer and how to honor the dead, while he provides a little spark and flavor to her life.

It'll be interesting to see whether or not Garensis will come to respect and adopt Nemu's outlook or reject it and discover a new outlook to contrast it.
The usual cliche path this kind of genre always take, eh? My only hope the dude just smart up a little bit. If he keeps doing stupid thing like this, one of the chapter will show Nemu drags his corpse out of the dungeon. Or not, since that's not her job.
 
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You know, it might have seemed like the woman's family disapproved of their marriage and that's why they invented that NTR story to explain her disappearance. But I got the impression that their marriage was not a problem, instead it was their visit to the dungeon. It seemed like pure thrill seeking right after the ceremony, hence the pawning off of the dress and this was seen as an embarrassment by the family.
 

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