Shokei Flag no Akuyaku Kizoku ni Tensei Shitaga, Shinitakunainode Yami Maho wo Kiwamete Heroine Tachi wo Sukuimasu Byojakuna Heroine wo Care Shitara …
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It's amazing how I know what will happen in the story 30 chapters from now just from the description alone.
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That's precisely why it's so comforting for a Japanese student preparing for an extrance exam (since kindergarten) or a salaryman slaving 12-hour shifts.
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Only 12 hours? Dude must me a manager or something. Normally it would be 16 hours and be thankful it's 18 to 20...
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Why does it seem like the maid has more balls than the mc does? Also what’s with the new comment system, early access commenting? What, is mangadex gunna try to force people into a battle pass for reading eventually?
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Aye. I don't know why I wrote 12 there. Far too little.
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You let your workers go home?
Do 25 hour workdays and there will never be overtime!
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O . o
No? What is this overtime you speak of...? there only salary slaves here...
Need to brush up on your cultural references m8. Black companies In manga typically work their employees such long hours they end up sleeping at or under their desk
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So, obvious problem here: Most of the events are rushed. Like, everything is way too fast.
Second problem: The art is trying to be serious? But we get usuall "funny" expressions from the manga, that don't hit, because we see it all the time.
Another problem: Everyone forgives him too easily, or rather, we don't get any forgivness development for characters, it just happens.
I could easily get 5 maybe more chapters of him since reincarnation to the start of training arc, and it would be interesting, duh, would probably make the manga better.
Training could be still a time skip, it's fine, time skipping training is ok.
But... um, it doesn't feel like he deserves to be this strong tho? Either don't show the training at all so we must imagine what he went through, or make it feel earned. All I saw was a guy running around and BOOM he has level 10 that no one has. Maybe show this time from this maid perspective, so we care more?
I could be annoyed more, and complain more, but this is clearly isekai slop, I have no excpetations
Second problem: The art is trying to be serious? But we get usuall "funny" expressions from the manga, that don't hit, because we see it all the time.
Another problem: Everyone forgives him too easily, or rather, we don't get any forgivness development for characters, it just happens.
I could easily get 5 maybe more chapters of him since reincarnation to the start of training arc, and it would be interesting, duh, would probably make the manga better.
Training could be still a time skip, it's fine, time skipping training is ok.
But... um, it doesn't feel like he deserves to be this strong tho? Either don't show the training at all so we must imagine what he went through, or make it feel earned. All I saw was a guy running around and BOOM he has level 10 that no one has. Maybe show this time from this maid perspective, so we care more?
I could be annoyed more, and complain more, but this is clearly isekai slop, I have no excpetations
wow this is so stupid. MC is scared or surprised in every fucking panel. don't you get tired of being a little bitch?!! and his surprised/scared faces are drawn exactly the same. art style is decent, but the actual art itself is very stiff and amateur feeling. is it supposed to be funny? it's not. it just comes off as pathetic.
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Pacing is as awkward as https://mangadex.org/title/fdf0f2a0...ryoku-de-tatakiotteitara-itsunomanika-heroine but as a fellow trash connoisseur will still follow.
I have a read a lot of "Reincarnated as a villian/villaines" and you know what they all have in common? They all begin BEFORE the villain does anything that is too evil, something that there is no way back from. I would like to see one in which the villain has to deal with the consequences of their previous actions and not basically get a clean slate.
Here we have one in which they did something that would at the very least make an enemy for life but the first page tells me that it just gets brushed off.
Here we have one in which they did something that would at the very least make an enemy for life but the first page tells me that it just gets brushed off.
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