Shoukan o Suberu Yami no Kizoku ni Tensei Shita: Bishoujo-tachi to Nijuu Seikatsu no Harem Life - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1

[MangaDex]

 

[xyzzy]

Okay, so normally I would go “oh the main character is reincarnated into a mafia family, play the meme“ or “oh another sex slave series, wonder why the author is so warped that they can only imagine having sex if someone is forced to do it with them for money”, so instead of that I wanted to focus on a different thing I was thinking



Putting aside the fact that he’s turning prostitutes into Girl Scouts selling cookies, wouldn’t the feature of a prostitute getting a kickback if they return empty boxes to the MC be abused? Like, I know the goal is to have them just sell candies to whomever they’re having sex with, but there’s nothing stopping them from just getting a box from the MC, giving the sweets away to local kids, and then returning the box for the kickback.

 

[lesseffective]

Please...please make yourself a master list of names to stick to. There's no reason for there to be such inconsistencies. After 3 uses in the first pages 'Valche' becomes 'Valsch' for the rest. One use of 'Rana' when all the rest are 'Lana'. 'Almira' becomes 'Almirah'.

I'm not trying to tell you which are correct, but I'm asking that you at least make them consistent and the same each time.

 

[Shaggyrand]

Okay, so normally I would go “oh the main character is reincarnated into a mafia family, play the meme“ or “oh another sex slave series, wonder why the author is so warped that they can only imagine having sex if someone is forced to do it with them for money”, so instead of that I wanted to focus on a different thing I was thinking

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Putting aside the fact that he’s turning prostitutes into Girl Scouts selling cookies, wouldn’t the feature of a prostitute getting a kickback if they return empty boxes to the MC be abused? Like, I know the goal is to have them just sell candies to whomever they’re having sex with, but there’s nothing stopping them from just getting a box from the MC, giving the sweets away to local kids, and then returning the box for the kickback.

The sweets are profitable enough to comment on in an organization that is already making bank. The sex workers buying the sweets themselves just to get a tiny portion of that back on return of the box is a terrible scheme.

 

[GenerousDude]

Please...please make yourself a master list of names to stick to. There's no reason for there to be such inconsistencies. After 3 uses in the first pages 'Valche' becomes 'Valsch' for the rest. One use of 'Rana' when all the rest are 'Lana'. 'Almira' becomes 'Almirah'.

I'm not trying to tell you which are correct, but I'm asking that you at least make them consistent and the same each time.

Yeah, mb 😔

 

[kirby_422]

The sweets are profitable enough to comment on in an organization that is already making bank. The sex workers buying the sweets themselves just to get a tiny portion of that back on return of the box is a terrible scheme.

Pretty sure it's the girls asking the customers to buy the sweets for them (similar to hostess club idea of buy the hosts some drinks, etc), and then when the girls turn in the tins they get some commission for that sale. The girls get sweets and commission, the men buy it for not only for them but other women since they see how happy it makes women, etc.

 

[Shaggyrand]

Pretty sure it's the girls asking the customers to buy the sweets for them (similar to hostess club idea of buy the hosts some drinks, etc), and then when the girls turn in the tins they get some commission for that sale. The girls get sweets and commission, the men buy it for not only for them but other women since they see how happy it makes women, etc.

That is exactly what it is.

 

[Goldni]

feel like it would of been better to wait for the full chapter to release it since its the 1st chapter. but this seems nice so far

 

[fury130]

he want a first dip

 

[Ryoga21]

not too bad

 

[Immortal44]

Thanks for the TL man i hope the next chapter comes soon

 

[josilva81]

Still not sold on this one, but I'm curious

Thanks for the chapter