Shounin Skill de Maoujou no Kouryaku wo Mezasu ~Isekai Tenishita no de Saikyou Item to Tookujutsu de Ikinuku to ni shita~ - Ch. 2 - Captain and Serva…

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Because it felt like straightening a tilted painting when half the house isn't even built yet.
Well, now you know better.
I also half-expected you to drop a wall of corrections like you did yesterday, so the juxtaposition was quite amusing
I find proofing through forum quotes an unacceptably unreliable PITA both in writing up for the proofer and in implementing for the SL. Did it there to make a point of the needless, avoidable, and crass precipitation of quality out of having been goaded into a blinkered rush to meet some misguided challenge.
 
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wow this is one of the sloppiest scanlations i've seen in a long time. terrible CL/RD, terrible typesetting, terrible grammar

guess i'm putting this series on hold until someone who takes it more serious picks it up. i don't wish for a snipe often, but this is definitely one of the rare occasions
 
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This translation is giving an aneurysm.

I can't believe it's MTL because even google translate or Chatgpt have better grammar than that. How in tarnation can you fuck English that hard?

It's got to be on purpose. Someone hated their English classes so much they decided to spread this garbage.
 
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This translation is giving an aneurysm.

I can't believe it's MTL because even google translate or Chatgpt have better grammar than that. How in tarnation can you fuck English that hard?

It's got to be on purpose. Someone hated their English classes so much they decided to spread this garbage.
Yeah, this isn't MTL but probably someone who lack english proficiency, with a lot of typos like this.
 
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This was...a tough read, to say it in the nicest way possible. I appreciate the effort though. Really. We all start somewhere, and I was probably far worse myself when I took to the net. (y)

That said, it could really do with another proofreading pass. Consider pulling the text though something like Grammarly, perhaps. I don't know how good stuff like ChatGPT is at fixing grammar, though perhaps it'd do the trick if you tell it something like "try to fix grammar issues and stiff sentences without deviating from the original intent too far," then maybe. No idea how it'd do. Grammarly would almost certainly be better in terms of learning from the mistakes though.
 
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Source, pls? Image search fails me.

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They say this manga is bimonthly, so please consider spending more time on scanlating each chapter - no need to release as soon as possible. Also, consider the advices given on previous chapters.
Checking out this get published in Young Dragon Age, so that make it bimonthly and we're caught up to the raws, next raw is at the end of December
 
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She cares that he slightly touches her boobs, but she doesn’t care about being fully naked in front of him.

Priorities I guess
 

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