Shousetsu Toukou Saito o Riyou Shite Itara, Kurasu no Bishoujo ga Dokusha datta - Vol. 1 Ch. 3

[MangaDex]

 

[NZPIEFACE]

Some small advice for typesetting:
1) Play around with leading a bit to get comfortable spacing between lines that let's whole sentences fit within a bubble.
2) Hyphenate longer words like the "Understand" on page 5 which has it's own bubble.

Cheers and keep up the good work.

 

[xtremeloldude]

Tsugaru definitely has a crush on seto and is therefore trying to block her from being in the same group as seto

 

[Arcverson]

Is this another Oregairu rip off?

 

[welcome2atlantis]

This really sounds like an annoying love triangle.

 

[Soseki]

@NZPIEFACE Thank you for the advice!

 

[Callidus]

1. Take a group number out of the box (let's say 4)
2. Give 4 to Girl, Guy, and MC
3. Hide the number in sleeve
4. Go up to box to act like you're pulling
5. Boom, all in group 4

 

[ultraleaf]

Wow i saw that mile away

 

[Siquall]

What a not-interesting chapter.

 

[Shamz]

i thought the mc was only supposed to be a writer >,> but i guess he has the mc blood

 

[Eviltwinq]

What a not- interesting comment
also,
>oregairu rip off
Definitely a tweeter generation who never played vn or eroge before.

 

[Fukinweeb]

What's with the jojo poses

 

[Matt913]

Hikigaya Hachiman mode on

 

[Deathhappens]

Getting some oregairu vibes, her, fo'sho.