Jesus h christ. We went from Rizzi to Rizzie to Lizzie to Izii on the dog/wolf thing's name over the span of like 4 or 5 chapters. and then right back to Lizzie right on the very next page...
It's not that hard to at least be consistent. Maybe if you weren't so afraid of "DCMAs" from tits you could devote some time to proofreading your crap.
Um, thanks for cancelling the bogus debt and returning my house. Can I get my grandmother back too? Oh, is that what the small "nuisance" amount is for? Bastards.