Smoke Screen - Ch. 5

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Aw that was surprisingly short. Which is a shame, due to this it felt more like a sketch for a story, since the characters and the relationship didn't get to be really developed, and the ending felt abrupt. But it's probably the first published work for the author? Understandable in that case.
Anyway. Thanks a lot for the translation!
 
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Aw that was surprisingly short. Which is a shame, due to this it felt more like a sketch for a story, since the characters and the relationship didn't get to be really developed, and the ending felt abrupt. But it's probably the first published work for the author? Understandable in that case.
Anyway. Thanks a lot for the translation!
Thanks for reading!
Their first published work was actually After Killing You, the one licensed in English. This one came later. It's a shame it was so short and couldn't develop the plot properly, but we think it had something to do with the platform where it was released only allowing short series... The author actually said this was originally planned to be only 3 chapters o_O
 

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