I laughed so hard at "You're fired dude"might want to take another pass at this, you ended up with a lot of incorrect usage of 'he' and 'I'. It makes for a confusing read.
Using 'dude' feels like a strange choice, but it made me laugh.
I mean, it's a wall. It being something ill-suited for his powers is kinda the point.Having a skeleton as the big wall to surmount after aquiring death magic isn't a good choice if I'm being honest
Could've been much better with literally any other big bad monster aside from a skeleton or zombie or anything that's already dead