Sono Akuyaku Kizoku, Mama Heroine ga Suki Sugiru ~Shinshi na Doryoku de Saikyou to Nari Fuguu na Oshi Chara Tasukemakuru~ - Ch. 22.2

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On page 6, from the context, it seems it should be "But I'm not wavering anymore." instead of "But you're not wavering anymore." Don’t forget to correct it in the final panel on page 7 as well.

Also, in the last panel of page 10, it says 'Sir Sharon', but I’m pretty sure Sharon is female, so it should be 'Lady Sharon' or 'Madam Sharon'.

Finally, a minor thing: on page 1, the first panel says 'Chapter 2 (second half)', but it should be 'Chapter 22 (second half)'.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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@Ryujin1108 @Yukito00

On page 6, from the context, it seems it should be "But I'm not wavering anymore." instead of "But you're not wavering anymore." Don’t forget to correct it in the final panel on page 7 as well.

Also, in the last panel of page 10, it says 'Sir Sharon', but I’m pretty sure Sharon is female, so it should be 'Lady Sharon' or 'Madam Sharon'.

Finally, a minor thing: on page 1, the first panel says 'Chapter 2 (second half)', but it should be 'Chapter 22 (second half)'.

Thanks for the chapter!
Updated. pg 6 and 7 was alright no changes needed.
 
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Updated. pg 6 and 7 was alright no changes needed.
Yeah, rereading pages 5 and 6, it kind of makes sense, but it also feels a bit off since Demo says he was on the fence about whether he should take action or not.
 
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Still chuckle whenever someone says Demonio's full name.
It's literally Traitor Demon in both Portuguese and Spanish, it's such a John McBadGuy name
 
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Demonio just trying to do what's right. The fact it happens to increase the size of his harem is just a nice bonus.

Thanks for the upload.
 
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My man is rizzing the tall MILF elf waifu. Time to save her and add her into the harem squad! ✊️😈
 
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Updated. pg 6 and 7 was alright no changes needed.
I'm confused what the point of page 6's "you're not wavering anymore" is supposed to be, then.

The conversation is Demonio stating that he needed to confirm whether or not Tiera really wanted to die, because if she was truly resolved, he wouldn't interfere. But he sees this isn't the case, so he'll save her.

"You're not wavering anymore" really seems like it should either be:

"I'm not wavering anymore", showing his determination to save her
or "But you're wavering", showing that she isn't as resolved as she pretends to be

If she wasn't wavering, then he wouldn't be saving her.
 
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I was just searching for the sound effect for "babuh" but instead i stumbled upon my very first proper animu watching. Fuck i feel like shit now. I wish i can reexperience things fresh.
 

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