Sono Munou, Jitsu wa Sekai Saikyou no Mahoutsukai ~Munou to Sagesumare, Kizokuka kara Oidasareta ga, Gift "Tenseisha" ga Kakusei shite Zense no Noury…

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This is trash, competently executed.
The art is good enough, the baffled bystanders diverse enough, the plot points just novel enough, to elevate it to mediocrity.
I give it 6/10.

The MC is OP to the point of cringe. Yeah, you just spent artifacts worth a billion gold in order to grow crops worth a few thousand, while asking for no payment. Of course they'll love you. It's just not a very sustainable business model, you know?
But the MC is clearly going to have all the god-tier artifacts he needs.

If he had a finite number of them that had to be rationed out, it would risk making the story interesting, so he doesn't.
If he were smart enough to consider the consequences of his actions, it would risk making the story interesting, so he isn't.
If he had traumas and hangups from his previous life to process, it would risk making the story interesting, so he doesn't.

This is a frustrating manga to read. The author could have aimed for something better, but he didn't even try. He just decided to play the "OP hero" stuff for cheap laughs, like everybody else.
Damn you gave this a six? You’re one saint bro, I gave this one a TWO, and I’m being kind.

Okay, where to begin on why this is dogshit… Like anywhere you look, it’s dogshit filled with pity points.

Art: Bland. There’s no uniqueness whatsoever except for that Fenrir and its kid that gained some merit.

Story: Now this… had hope 10 to 14 chapters in. We see the protagonist being OP but being misunderstood because “he has no gifts”, okay that’s not unique but can be interesting if done correctly. MC led his brother or something opposite his way but his brother wrongly tells pursuers to chase him where he is going, okay maybe the MC has some kind of Cid luck in turning his bullshit into something beneficial to him. Then finds her FMC okay whatever, then the sidekick we can easily kill off for some “power levelling bullshit” we’ll encounter later I know it will happen and it did, tragically, bullshitly so. And then the story went on and it is below water-flavour bland. Everything is “eh, okay.”s and “hm. expected.” It doesn’t even have character growths, developments or worldbuilding. I remember they went to the castle, why? Can’t remember. Did some things there, and now they’re married with the ruler under the MCs? In a game of guess the title this thing is so hard to answer because SO MANY had done these before and you can’t pinpoint a unique thing for this.

Characters: Oh don’t even get me fcking started. Next. No? Okay… MC is stupidly OP, and dense is not the right word for him, and so is retard . He is… by all means OP, but the writer doesn’t even know what his character is. Imagine a line, that’s the MC is, just a line, could be curvy, could be straight, could be wiggly. But all that he amounts to is a LINE. FMC? She’s… okay??? She has talent, the desire to grow and protect, yada, yada, yada, typical FMC from FMC factory. Sidekick? Becomes fcking invisible to others I can’t even remember his name. Just “MCs sidekick”. There’s the FMCs sister that you can forget, the MCs past where he forgot so we shall too, the Antagonist with whoa… Usurper skill. Wow what can it do, guys? WHAT CAN USURPER DO IF HE IS AN ANTAGONIST??? OH MY GOD HE STEALS SKILLS MAKING THEM POWERLESS??? WHO COULD’VE SEEN THIS COMING??? It’s all bad. You’re already bland but you just gotta make it more bland to make it bland.

Worldbuilding: Does this EVEN have ANY? No? Oh my god man… I won’t even explain.

Writing: …
Here I’ll give you the rundown for the writing:
“It’s water,
served on an aged plate,
filled with mold all around it.
Eaten with forks
because you’re trying to be boujee,
but everyone knows
its incorrect and stupid.
And, topped off with a whole fucking turd,
to give the food some taste.”


So overall, it should’ve been this low. Two is my kindness for it because it shows me how bad mangas can be, it’s always good to read bullshit like this to make you thankful for the blessings and gems you read sometimes. It’s already mediocre enough but pair it with bad writing and by the gods it’s bad. Read something else, and thank goodness for that DMCA so that no one has the right to read this garbage. Gatekeep it for all I care, I’ve read the whole thing and it shouldn’t even have to be published.
 
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Damn you gave this a six? You’re one saint bro, I gave this one a TWO, and I’m being kind.

Oh, this is nowhere near the bottom for me, I think the lowest I've given is a four, as a warning to myself to never read that manga again if I find it randomly and don't remember it.
It's just that I can't bring myself to read anything I'd rate 1-3.

Like, at 1/10, it doesn't even qualify as a manga. The translator left the speech bubbles empty by mistake or something.
2/10 is pitiable, like, stick-figure art. Maybe the plot was stolen and they forgot to rename the characters.
3/10 is baffling, like every word is a different font size because of bad AI translation, or half the pages are upside down.
and 4/10 is where you can read it without trouble, but you hate it and it puts you in a bad mood.
At 5/10, reading the story is better than staring into a blank wall, but barely so.

I feel like if I gave a 2/10 to just anyone, it would lessen the impact when I call out truly irredeemable garbage.
(This is also why I don't swear much.)
Similarly, I've given maybe three 10/10 ratings, compared to about a hundred 7/10.
 

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