Soredemo Kimi o Shiawase ni Shitai - Vol. 1 Ch. 7 - You've Been With Us All Along

[citatel]

Bruh that translation is tough to follow

yeah..understandable. we tried to humanize they way they speak but it kinda gets hard when the personality swap gets a little confusing sometimes since they have different manners of speech...if you have specific pannels you'd like to point out, feel free to dm me on Discord.

 

[citatel]

Definitely feels like more of a visual indication when she switches would be useful. Like even just a small symbol on the side. Maybe im just dumb but I've noticed myself having to double check "who" is talking at the moment, especially since both personalities talk in 3rd person alot.

we'll try giving them more personality in their speeches.

 

[RKMurphy]

we'll try giving them more personality in their speeches.

Damn thats actually really appreciated. Honestly its not the biggest deal, i can usually pick it up because Tamaki is obviously less lovey dovey. Its probably just kinda an inevitable consequence of the plot honestly.

 

[Maxoball]

I swear if the ending is gonna be sad af where tamaki just dissapear but they made it look like as if a ghost faded a way I'd fuckin cry fr ☠️

 

[asian_weeb]

hmm thats fair. If you have specific places you'd like to point out, feel free to dm me on Discord.

It's not specific things so much as it is the entire script. Much of it does not read like English written by an English speaker. It reads more like English that got sent through several languages in Google Translate and then back to English - the individual words make sense (except for "tact". I have no idea what that's supposed to mean in the context of this chapter), but when you try to read a sentence, it's quite difficult to understand what it's supposed to mean.

If you don't have any native English speakers on your TL or PR teams, you need one ASAP.

 

[walczyk]

yeah..understandable. we tried to humanize they way they speak but it kinda gets hard when the personality swap gets a little confusing sometimes since they have different manners of speech...if you have specific pannels you'd like to point out, feel free to dm me on Discord.

Thanks for responding! I can help in discord when I have time

 

[walczyk]

It's not specific things so much as it is the entire script. Much of it does not read like English written by an English speaker. It reads more like English that got sent through several languages in Google Translate and then back to English - the individual words make sense (except for "tact". I have no idea what that's supposed to mean in the context of this chapter), but when you try to read a sentence, it's quite difficult to understand what it's supposed to mean.

If you don't have any native English speakers on your TL or PR teams, you need one ASAP.

The main issue is the use of the names; Tamaki and Manaki keeps being switched while also used in uncommon/incorrect ways in english.

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[Tinker_OwO]

I appreciate the translation, but oof, it is pretty hard to follow what they're talking about sometimes loll

You should probably have a native english speaker to edit the text, just to make a little bit easier to read loll

 

[Xxjuggernaut]

Wait... if she has Split Personalities... then...
if they ever come a time where they had sex and she suddenly change to tamaki....
wouldn't that consider him Cheating?

i'm thinking way into this i'm so sorry

No, because this dumbass arbitrary way of writing is retarded. Its the SAME FUCKING PERSON.

 

[Xxjuggernaut]

You can tell who is in control when you look at facial expressions AND how the girl holds the bag.

 

[FloorRoof]

Manaki always has her hair swept over her right eye, and Tamaki has them over her left eye. That's the primary way of telling them apart.
It was explained in the sidenotes in Chapter 3, page 3.

 

[GrumpyGizmo]

Annoying how Tamaki comes out every single time.

 

[wallsg]

Definitely feels like more of a visual indication when she switches would be useful. Like even just a small symbol on the side. Maybe im just dumb but I've noticed myself having to double check "who" is talking at the moment, especially since both personalities talk in 3rd person alot.

I fully agree, I was confused the entire chapter about who was in control right now, I honestly assumed it was Manaki the whole time but I am still not sure

mhm. I get you. some times its a bit difficult to spot lol. there are times where I had to flip back few pannels to figure things out.

It was stated in the Chapter 3 Page 3 sidebar that Manaki's hair goes toward her right eye and Tamaki's toward her left eye.