So far your translation and quaility seems pretty good. even the type setting is pretty good. i hope you pump out more chapter soon dude. Remember the more chapters you pump out the better your procrastination will be for your finals! YAY PROCRASTINATION!
It's a good translation, you're using google translate well. 1 thing though, can you differentiate the fonts when they're speaking [translated Swahili] to each other and the japanese Taiga used?
Awesome, Love the work you're doing! I like that you had a chance to translate the swahili. I agree with @juviegar that adding a different font when they're speaking adds aesthetic and helps differentiate when the natives speak and when Taiga speaks.