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@TheSilverhand
While I'd agree with your action movie comparison and that it needs some breaks/lighter chapters, this chapter doesn't feel like a break, it feels like it tries to keep up the tone, but it ran out of ideas so it resorted to cheap tricks.
Imo this is the point where it starts to suffer from it's episodic nature, there're only so many emotional one off stories that you can tell with the same 2-3 characters in such a limited page count.
While I'd agree with your action movie comparison and that it needs some breaks/lighter chapters, this chapter doesn't feel like a break, it feels like it tries to keep up the tone, but it ran out of ideas so it resorted to cheap tricks.
Imo this is the point where it starts to suffer from it's episodic nature, there're only so many emotional one off stories that you can tell with the same 2-3 characters in such a limited page count.