yeah, i think there's definitely some criticism to give. the art is cute, premise sounds interesting, but it's... sort of like it's the same punchline being used over and over again. not to mention the siblings got introduced, possibly as a way to make the story more interesting, but.. it doesn't make it more interesting when there's some sort of lack of personality. nothing to really make the characters feel distinct as they're just plain archetypes... i hope the author and artist don't give up just yet cause i think it still has potential 😥