This is one of the best "beginner" scanlations that I've come across. The dialogue flows well, the typesetting is nicely spaced, none of the localisation or translations seem awkward or stilted and the grammar is perfect. The only thing that bugs me though is the font choice but thats more of a nitpick since it's readable and that's what really matters in the end. Thanks for the effort and I hope you're finding enough enjoyment from doing this to keep going!