how i feel when ive read the whole thing and everyone else is speculatingOk so she is going to fall for him hard right?
Thanks everyone at IAIKIRLKIRTIWKMS Scans for the translation
ok i fixed the typos and the suggestions will be considered in the future.@dasdafd typos:
Page 2: my bathes -> my baths
Page 21: Crossbar I
As for suggestions, generally you want the text in a bubble to look roughly like an oval if possible, which means the lines in the middle should usually be the longest, and the widths of the lines should change gradually
A (non-exhaustive) list of where this can be applied (underlined words should be on the same line):
Page 2: And it's not like...
Page 3: Today is the...
Page 5: I want to go to...
Page 11: What is this...
Page 24: ...outside of her...
do not let the hachikuji in the credits page fool you i am kokoro for life (she does have the funniest panels though i will admit that)I have a feeling that of all three succubi the TL likes the cunny one
Would you admit that she is cute tho?do not let the hachikuji in the credits page fool you i am kokoro for life (she does have the funniest panels though i will admit that)