Suki x Suki - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - I Became Invisible!

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Hm.... In first why he only ask her to take the box, there are ton students, there are boys
 
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Yeeeeahhh no.
Premise is fun, and lewd FMC more or less uncommon, but...
First off, she's not INVISIBLE. She can touch people and they don't feel it. She can scream/bang a wall and they don't hear it. I may be splitting hairs, but even for a rom-com at least get your story straight. And if you don't want to disclose to the readers yet cause you wanna play that card later, at least do it properly. Your character needs to question it.

Second, not only is the FMC a tsundere, which always gets people on the fence between annoying/fun, she's an abusive bitch tsundere. She's abrasive. She pushes the poor guy onto a puddle, he's the one that apologizes (typical Japan), and then we move onto the "invisible" and lewd shenanigans. I 100% doubt she'll apologize next chapter.

Gonna drop. Enjoy, everyone.
 
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Feel like she was better in the oneshot because she wasn’t mean so much as just acted like she disliked him, whereas now she’s physically abusive
 
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shes invisible but shouldnt everyone else be able to see stuff moving around her and hear her?
 
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this is so cute, but for the people confused-- perhaps its like bunny-girl senpai where whatever the invisible girl touches, it disappears also.
 
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it's pretty hard to believe he doesn't involuntarily react to her within the first 10 seconds, let alone forever. humans are really good at noticing whether or not others notice them.
 
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it's pretty hard to believe he doesn't involuntarily react to her within the first 10 seconds, let alone forever. humans are really good at noticing whether or not others notice them.
I guess her thoughts also turned invisible and she can no longer think about anything
 
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bruh this girl is such a bitch when she's visible. kinda reminds me of that manga where the vampire sister is a bitch to her brother but when her red ribbon comes off she's an angel.
Do you know the name of the manga? Sounds like it could be funny.
 

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