Already a lot better. Some issues:
- His name is Shiina (with 2 i's), not Shina.
- Pg. 122: Should be "It's" instead of "Its".
- Punctuation.
- Missing/incorrect articles and prepositions but I'm no expert at this. My English is suck.
- Keep the page width consistent. Either upscale the smaller pages (recommended), or downscale the bigger ones.
- Some typesetting issues (text not well balanced, text not well aligned, et cetera). Example: https://postimg.cc/gL0dg21N vs. https://postimg.cc/dkxxBwdK
Also, why am I commenting when I don't know jack shit about English or typesetting or anything about the scanlation process?