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This is just terrible, the story, at the times that there's something like it, is all over the place, and the pacing is awful. I dislike when the isekai introduction is too long, but man, at least give me something a bit longer than 3 panels.
It tries to make the retardedly naïve and hypocrite MC become an edgy revenge "I trust nobody" type of dude, but fails miserably, I can understand trying to get answers, but boy, you were purposefully trapped to death with the ruler of the "enemy" you were trying to seek peace with, but for some reason, you were as well trying to kill her ?XD?XD?XD?XD WHAT WHYY??? Why does he have to have a sand grain sized brain??? The only outcome of that is either rebellion or oppression, who in their right mind would reach the conclusion that killing demons is the right way to achieve friendly relationship with them? Just tell me how you go from "I don't care if we win or lose if we can get along with the demons" to attempting friendly relationships, just illuminate my clearly inferior brain that doesn't seem to understand the sacred path from "Me kill u, u kill us" to "War? Idc man, we frends lul". Then you get some bussy and become all "I'll protecc smile" for some reason.
The smut doesn't even help at all, it actually makes it worse, you basically got a bukkake of information and attempted "character development" in basically less than a chapter, and a sex scene as duct tape so the war crime that the plot is doesn't stand out too much, c'mon, I'm not even close to a god tier writer, but this is just lame...
Avoid this unless you're seriously trying to lose braincells on purpose, you've been warned!
It tries to make the retardedly naïve and hypocrite MC become an edgy revenge "I trust nobody" type of dude, but fails miserably, I can understand trying to get answers, but boy, you were purposefully trapped to death with the ruler of the "enemy" you were trying to seek peace with, but for some reason, you were as well trying to kill her ?XD?XD?XD?XD WHAT WHYY??? Why does he have to have a sand grain sized brain??? The only outcome of that is either rebellion or oppression, who in their right mind would reach the conclusion that killing demons is the right way to achieve friendly relationship with them? Just tell me how you go from "I don't care if we win or lose if we can get along with the demons" to attempting friendly relationships, just illuminate my clearly inferior brain that doesn't seem to understand the sacred path from "Me kill u, u kill us" to "War? Idc man, we frends lul". Then you get some bussy and become all "I'll protecc smile" for some reason.
The smut doesn't even help at all, it actually makes it worse, you basically got a bukkake of information and attempted "character development" in basically less than a chapter, and a sex scene as duct tape so the war crime that the plot is doesn't stand out too much, c'mon, I'm not even close to a god tier writer, but this is just lame...
Avoid this unless you're seriously trying to lose braincells on purpose, you've been warned!
