Sweet Reincarnation - Vol. 1 Ch. 1.1

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Feels a little rough at the moment. It's kind of interesting, though. Let's see how this goes
 
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Urgh, writing is horrible at the moment. It might get better though and I'm really interested in the idea, so following it for now.

Also, the dude got killed by a fucking cake?
 
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Let's start well ...
They clearly missed parts during the creation of this manga, like the one in which he convinces his father to do those things to improve the harvest.
Even if I haven't read the novel I can't imagine how many other parts will jump, I would have preferred that at least the beginning explained it calmly. 🤔
 
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You usually want to sell someone with your first chapter. Get'em hooked, so to say.

Yeah, this failed spectacularly at that, lol.
 
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Madam Friedprawn Friedbutter from Maou-sama Retry laughs at the tame food names in this manga.
 
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I thought the most poverty name was Alexis but clearly I wasn't thinking poor enough with names like Sheets and fucking Lettuce
 
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The story had potential to be like a Duke's Daughter in regards to management of a territory and world building, but this pacing is horrible even for a first chapter. It feels way too fast and drama coming in already before establishing a backstory for the new world is really throwing me off.
 
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