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jak
"NTR is the thinking man's fetish, amirite?"
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AbyssalMonkey
MC is the "nice guy" type. That's not even beta, but OMEGA-tier mc. He's not pressured by anybody, but still lacks confidence or willpower to do what he wants, if he even wants anything at all.
Alpha in your imagination sounds a lot like "School days" protag lol. If you reference anime when talking about IRL, that's fucking unreal. Go outside for once.
People want to see GAR characters with a will of their own, not a wet noodle that needs his gf for protection.
On an unrelated note, will they ever tell us about the people Lizzy or her father killed? Methods, count, ages, maybe a PTSD from a fucked up job(e.g Maki and her katana contract)?
Throwing around "I kill people, I'm azazin
" without any evidence isn't going to work for long.