Sword Dance Online

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I'll admit, the translations are a step up from the...words someone else slapped on the previous chapters. Still, scale the size of the pages down and maybe chop them up into more page shaped chunks so they can reside more easily in the viewer.
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...Story is still kinda trash, though, given that they abandoned the previous plot and are starting over with a different storyline...
 
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Got 9 chapters in
They realize hes not random data
force bullshit plot on to him anyway.
10/10 storytelling would reject again
 
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there was an interesting concept here, but the author executed their idea so incredibly poorly it made this total garbage.
 
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This is one of those where you turn your brain off while reading as well as your dick off because it has trash Chinese censorship, so you are better off jacking off to a black screen than this.
 
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So... I don't know why I read this... I don't know why you possibly read this...
Now I don't know if I'm braindead or not. Trying to make sense of anything was... difficult.
 

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