Sword, Tiara and High Heels - Vol. 3 Ch. 14

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Thank you for the chapter! Fingers crossed her mother is just out cold and not cold on the floor.
 
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I don't get it, she's wearing a tiara, holding a sword, but she's barefoot?

What the heck?
 
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Page 3 Panel 1, I know both mean I, but it better to just make it "I ... I(Male/M)" since usually this kind of thing will be important down the line in this kind of manga. Also Panel 2 probably "What am I doing?" is more correct than "what have you done?". Panel 3 "I can't help but feel angry at my own powerlessness." is probably more correct. Panel 4 "It's frustrating" or just "frustrating" is probably more correct when you look at all other panel than regret. CMIIW.
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I'm kinda surprised by how cheap the monsters are in this
 
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Page 3 Panel 1, I know both mean I, but it better to just make it "I ... I(Male/M)" since usually this kind of thing will be important down the line in this kind of manga. Also Panel 2 probably "What am I doing?" is more correct than "what have you done?". Panel 3 "I can't help but feel angry at my own powerlessness." is probably more correct. Panel 4 "It's frustrating" or just "frustrating" is probably more correct when you look at all other panel than regret. CMIIW.
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Sounds about right, I would use the phrase "What am I even doing" instead of "What am I doing" so it sounds more like a rhetorical question, to keep the original meaning
 
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the novel of this has gl and bl in the keywords, why is this not tagged as such? it should also have the gore tag, it should be changed.

edit: the bl and gl are the first keywords on syosetu btw
 
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