Well this is the first chapter of this series that actually made me feel icky. She kept asking her to stop or at least slow down some and she just kept forcing herself onto her. That's super rapey...
Oh well thanks for the chapter as always.
Doesn’t bother me too much but I just didn’t like the chapter all that much
Thought the introduction and focus of even more girls, 4 at that, was eh but I ended up liking the first 2 so ig it’s fine
Though I’d still like a bit more story and focus rather than aloofness if that makes sense
More of a plot line and focus on the girls so to say and a bit slower paced if that makes sense
Something to tie the story down a bit more, I don’t mind what it currently is because it’s a nice change not being all to serious and on a continuous timeline, (or whatever the word for it is) but a
bit (doesn’t even have to fully become serious and tied down) more balance with a story aspect would nice
