Tadashii Kodomo no Tsukurikata! - Vol. 7 Ch. 68 - Bright Future

[omnixd]

it was garbo, koyomi shafted KEK

 

[anime1337]

This was a sprint to the finish if I've ever seen one. A shame. It started alright, but the numerous plot holes, inconsistencies, and what seemed like the author changing the story a few times drove the entire thing into a wall for me.

 

[Soundwave14]

Thanks for the hard work on finishing this up

 

[ventzx]

thanks for the hard work, now I can close another chapter.

 

[contrasena]

@LokiAsengott Thanks to you I can say that because of this manga I learned what it really means "08/15" as I had to look for it after reading you comment. Before I thought that it was reffering to Glasgow scale for coma, as the score 8 (of 15) is indicative of a coma level of consciusness. Thank you!!!😀

And sadly to say... that is the only meaningful thing that this manga gave me at the end.

 

[chusetto]

Nice ecchi, didn't stay for the story ha ha Thanks for the translation

 

[DeadlyShadow0]

The start was promising... the ending not really and they leave a lot of plot holes

 

[Lulerus]

😏

 

[Oneesamaa]

The beginning was really interesting but sensei's still inexperienced.
Let's hope he'll improve himself if he does another manga.

 

[Hootanic]

They got the Samurai Jack ending kind of...

 

[NODZZ]

@MesaOracle I can't fucking believe you reminded me of this gem. This is the only good thing to come out of reading the end of this manga lmao.

Manga ending was meh despite the interesting intro, the gun hold-up and bio lab shit was wack and im upset about it but oh well.

 

[KLGChaos]

I think a better way to end this series would have been to shift the focus to preventing the creation of the lab virus. They could of pulled a Reborn and gone to the future to stop it from being created after the initial viral wave died off. Would have been far more interesting than they plot-holed mess we had.

 

[WildJoker]

Years ago I started this, today I finished. Felt like the author needlessly extended and made up drama midway, only to have to finish rushedly then.

 

[ExarchOfAfrica]

This story is definitely higher than a 6.93 if the same romcom drek keeps fishing scores of 8+ on here.

The story is convoluted, yes. There certainly are plot holes and whatnot. However, some of the more egregious ones are solved. The most prominent is why Tatsumi Ratio didn't kill Tanaka. My theory at the start was that he's a descendant of Tanaka and it seems I was right given the end. Perhaps not the same way he came into being otl, but the timeline still corrected itself, thus resolving a problem with causality. To a degree, Asuka going so far back in time before all this may have caused the timeline to shift in the first place. Its evident that the leaders of the future are playing a temporal game far beyond their control as practically all the agents sent back either defected or went rogue. All their scheming and infighting only allowed Ratio, who did have the backing of people in the past, to mobilize a force string enough to change history.

There were definetly plot problems. The romance was painfully slow, even if some questions like keeping a status quo between childhood friends were good ideas. While I slowed down by reading pace midway the quick ending, perhaps from an ax, made me interested again. I also respect the childhood friend ending at all which is too rare, with other stories throwing away those female leads. I think the other female lead who fell in love handled herself well enough, but the ending with her being zombified and not appearing again did her dirty.

Sometimes a story needs to be defended for being creative. This story is certainly one of them. If I don't support stories like this then this only encourages slop to be written instead. As such, I applaud the author for their original and good, if flawed, story. An enormous shame that no english paperback exists.

8/10.