It took me a bit to understand some of the stuff in the chapter but overall seems like a pretty solid translation, especially from someone who doesn't have a fighting game background. When you're getting something like this that's fairly technical, mixed with a lot of slang as well, it's going to be tricky to get it right. Especially when people from different regions use different terms for the same things. Overall I'm super happy to see a manga made by someone with such a love of fighting games and I'm happy that you're translating it.