Taida na Akujoku Kizoku ni Tensei shita Ore, Scenario o Bukkowashitara Kikakugai no Maryoku de Saikyou ni Natta - Vol. 1 Ch. 2

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plot is good
gag is good

but why novel rating on NU is so bad ?
The Web Novel is being translated by someone using MTL and as such is horrible and even worse he is charging those who want to read some more chapters in advance.

Seriously, the names, the pronouns, the expressions are a mess.

For example, In one chapter, Milk is referred to as Milch, Miruku or even Melk and is sometimes referred to as "he" which is an obvious sign of MTL.

The horrible translation has also lead people to outright misunderstanding the story and the plot in a negative way.
 
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so I think the real question is, why was someone of her caliber allowing herself to be abused by the original Weiss. Guess we'll find out in later chapters
My guess is that she was into it? A wild take, I know but in the first chapter, she rushed to his aide when he was beaten by the protag, and she was more surprised rather than relieved after he showed her sympathy
 
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daamn reading the comments in ch.1 and now this one... gonna follow for 2 reasons:
1. racoons
2. maid being the more unhinged so far.
 
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I had some suspicion that Lilith were up to something. I mean her name is literally Lilith Scarlet. Now we see what she's capable of, I wonder if Lilith was the one to sway Weiss tp the demonic side in the original game route.

I also love the comedy here, when Milk suddenly missing in the next panel right after assuring him lmaoooo!! didn't expect it. Milk's method in fights is shown that she plays dirty quite a lot huh. This could show that she had to in order to survive or just to show how suck the world is that adventurers have to resort to.

Thank you so much for the sl!
 
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The premise in these two chapters make it really feel like the most generic slop...

So, next chapter when?
 
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I've posted this on the main page but I have read the novel and, here is a quick overview of things. (In my Opinion)

-This is school focused and most of the story is mostly MC competing with his classmates in school exams, tests and events(The exams themselves are based from tests and exams from shounen series like Naruto, One Piece and HunterxHunter).

-Despite the gags, this is a relatively serious story.

-Despite the premise, Weiss is actually not the "Main Villain" here(that title belongs to another student)

He is basically that one jobber in isekai academies that calls out to the Hero/Protagonists tells them they are unworthy of being here due to their low status/trash skill/incompetent etc then is btfo as a demonstration of the Hero/Protagonists skills and abilities.

-Weiss the MC is not a "pussy" or indecisive and knows what he wants and is not afraid to commit to attain it.


-He is also not(mostly) a dumbass and he always tries to plan things things out and knows if something is beyond knowledge or strength, he is not afraid to ask advice and help from his friends and teachers(hence the Shounen elements of Cooperation, Trust and the Power of Friendship).

-Unless the Light Novels cuts all of it, Weiss in the Web Novel also is not dense to romance.

Ex: there was one moment in the WN, where he was sleeping in his bed and when he woke up and saw the Heroine sleeping beside him wearing nothing but a sleeping gown and instead of screaming or acting all flustered, he started playing with her body and when she woke up they flirted for a bit then she french kissed him and they had sex. (Unfortunately, this scene wss edited out and replaced with a cliche event where MC sets up a Maid Cafe in school.)


-There are actual stakes in this story and costs if MC fails them. This is why there is a "Tragedy" tag in this series. (However, this will only be known much later).


-There is a good amount of learning during school especially since the main way MC gets stronger is learning skills and spells from his classmates and they in turn learn from him so this way everybody gets stronger.


-There are zero "Game Elements" in this world so there is No:
1.)Dungeons with monsters spawning out of nowhere. resetting bosses.

2.)Infinitely spawning chests or other materials and resources.

3.)Level Up system and getting skills by "leveling up"(so everybody in this world gets stronger by practice and training)

-Decent amount of Slife of Life when not fighting like MC and all his male and female friends going to the beach, drinking, cebrating winter festivities and going on adventures.

-MC is not overpowered. He is strong but most of his friends are nearly as strong as him and he is not even the strongest in schoo even later on(although this will not be apparent since at Volume 1, it does seem he really is OP).


-The main waifu is also the Heroine of the game and MC made her fall in love with her and made her his fiance so it's kind of Netori.


-This is a harem but the main waifu(The Heroine who was suppose to fall in love with the Protagonist/Hero) does not want a harem so she resists attempts so basically MC only has 2 girls and a bunch of girls who want to be part of the harem and this is still the case in later volumes and is one of the motivations for the Heroine to get stronger; to prevent harem from happening.


-The Hero is not a bad guy here and he becomes a friend and rival to MC in school although MC is too tsundere to admit it. The best eay to describe their relationship(At least beyond Volume 1) is basically Goku and Vegeta.

-There is a lot of character development for both the MC, the main characters and even minor characters and even lets them move the plot forwards so it does not feel like the story revolves around the MC.


The story is a bit too fast at the beginning in particular Volume 1 since it has all these timeskips since the story is trying to get to the school ASAP. so you need to be patient for things to slow down and also there is barely any Build-up or development in this Volume, but there is a lot of setting up of the plot for future developments.

So it's best to treat Volume 1 as one long Prologue where you familiarize yourself with the characters(Especially Weiss and Allen since you need to read all of Volume 1 to fully understand their characters) and learn what their goals are.


-Volume 1 is also the weakest volume of the series since it has plotholes and inconsistencies which will not be addressed until Volume 2 and beyond. For example: Lilith the maid is actually still secretly suspicious of of Weiss sudden change in personality and is a recurring plot in later volumes.


-Another inconsistency(which IMO is the worst part of the story) is how Weiss seems to all of a sudden antagonize the Protagonist despite him saying he wants to avoid his doomed fate. Also what they were arguing over is the issue of slavery and Allen the Protagonist wants to abolish slavery and Weiss says while he is Anti-Slavery, he says just freeing everyone without providing anything for them in return is a bad idea and this sours their relationship for a bit until it resolves by the end of Volume 1.


-The Light Novel edited out a lot of good moments from the Web Novel so you will likely not see them in the manga.


-One of the things edited out of the Light Novel was MC and Main Waifu having a heart to heart to talk which led to them making out in public.


-Another thing they removed in the Light Novel was the s*x. In the Web Novel After he made the Heroine of the game his Main Waifu, they constantly had s*x even inside the school dormitory so it really did feel like he NTR'd the Game Protagonist.


-The Game Protagonist and Heroine keep getting partnered just like in the game world and because of this, they have a friendly relationship but not a romantic one but it still annoys MC so if you don't like the thought of MC having a potential love rival then this might not be the series for you.


-Not much worldbuilding since they are inside the school 90% of the time
Does he ever get with the maid?
 
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Milk is hilarious, the name itself is hilarious. The contrast of the name and the person itself is even more hilarious
 

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