Takamine-san wa, Asuka-kun to Asobitai. - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.2

[MangaDex]

 

[danklamp]

The English is very... off?
Was the title for the first page meant to be Interrogation rather than integration which is a math function.
Page 2: "They are being Mercilessly" -> "They are being merciless." "aren't Takamine's all her friend Is good friend?" -> "Aren't all of Takamine's friend's good friends?"
Not trying to be rude but I think you should get someone to read over it, like a proofreader. Thanks for the effort tho.

 

[MFOYeniTurku]

The English is very... off?
Was the title for the first page meant to be Interrogation rather than integration which is a math function.
Page 2: "They are being Mercilessly" -> "They are being merciless." "aren't Takamine's all her friend Is good friend?" -> "Aren't all of Takamine's friend's good friends?"
Not trying to be rude but I think you should get someone to read over it, like a proofreader. Thanks for the effort tho.

I did the last part that way on purpose because it was easier to start a sentence with "d". But you are right, I was careless about the rest of the part though.I will more careful,i hope.

 

[Nivek]

I did the last part that way on purpose because it was easier to start a sentence with "d". But you are right, I was careless about the rest of the part though.I will more careful,i hope.

still give the vibes of japanese slang, thanks for the translation buddy

 

[Potaru]

I have no idea what this is or what is happening. I am so confused.

 

[Locke_Smithy]

the translation scrambled my brain

 

[Andasen]

Am i reading a scripture translation or something?