Takamine-san wa, Asuka-kun to Asobitai. - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.2
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The English is very... off?
Was the title for the first page meant to be Interrogation rather than integration which is a math function.
Page 2: "They are being Mercilessly" -> "They are being merciless." "aren't Takamine's all her friend Is good friend?" -> "Aren't all of Takamine's friend's good friends?"
Not trying to be rude but I think you should get someone to read over it, like a proofreader. Thanks for the effort tho.
Was the title for the first page meant to be Interrogation rather than integration which is a math function.
Page 2: "They are being Mercilessly" -> "They are being merciless." "aren't Takamine's all her friend Is good friend?" -> "Aren't all of Takamine's friend's good friends?"
Not trying to be rude but I think you should get someone to read over it, like a proofreader. Thanks for the effort tho.
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I did the last part that way on purpose because it was easier to start a sentence with "d". But you are right, I was careless about the rest of the part though.I will more careful,i hope.The English is very... off?
Was the title for the first page meant to be Interrogation rather than integration which is a math function.
Page 2: "They are being Mercilessly" -> "They are being merciless." "aren't Takamine's all her friend Is good friend?" -> "Aren't all of Takamine's friend's good friends?"
Not trying to be rude but I think you should get someone to read over it, like a proofreader. Thanks for the effort tho.
still give the vibes of japanese slang, thanks for the translation buddy
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the translation scrambled my brain
The translation feels a bit rough in places, but Asuka and Takamine are playing a word chain game where each sentence begins with the same letter as the previous sentence's last letter.
T: Do you want to stop by my place on your way home, Asuka?
A: Are you sure? Isn't it too early to meet your family?
T: You know...
As I reread this chapter again with that in mind, it's much easier to follow as the game -- not the translation -- makes for less smooth conversation dialog between Asuka and Takamine.
T: Do you want to stop by my place on your way home, Asuka?
A: Are you sure? Isn't it too early to meet your family?
T: You know...
As I reread this chapter again with that in mind, it's much easier to follow as the game -- not the translation -- makes for less smooth conversation dialog between Asuka and Takamine.
