Takane no Hana wa Midaresaki - Ch. 82 - Silence is Priceless

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Now this is just romcom writing nonsense. You did almost everything under sun with the guy except sex but nudity is where you draw the line? C'mon now.
The uneven nature of their progress makes it impossible for me to believe in this story, it just feels like is trying to cater to specific fetishes of the author with no regards for consistency and or continuity.

I feel like it also cast a negative light on the S&M community by showcasing these teens performing dangerous things like breath play and outright violent acts.
Plus this story has been going on for seven years, they shouldn't be acting awkward around each other
 
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Looks like author wanted to write the trope of the girl getting embarrassed to be seen without truly thinking if it fits the story.
 
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The uneven nature of their progress makes it impossible for me to believe in this story, it just feels like is trying to cater to specific fetishes of the author with no regards for consistency and or continuity.

I feel like it also cast a negative light on the S&M community by showcasing these teens performing dangerous things like breath play and outright violent acts.
Plus this story has been going on for seven years, they shouldn't be acting awkward around each other
From the start it's been pretty unrealistic and wish fulfilment adjacent. Specially the male lead. There are times he almost comes across as a mind reader because they don't REALLY communicate about intensity or the acts. He just does EXACTLY what she wants EVERYTIME. It's quite nonsensical overall. This is what happens when you try to write a no stakes loser x popular girl romcom slop with these sort of themes i guess. This is definitely a author fetish situation.
 
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From the start it's been pretty unrealistic and wish fulfilment adjacent. Specially the male lead. There are times he almost comes across as a mind reader because they don't REALLY communicate about intensity or the acts. He just does EXACTLY what she wants EVERYTIME. It's quite nonsensical overall. This is what happens when you try to write a no stakes loser x popular girl romcom slop with these sort of themes i guess. This is definitely a author fetish situation.
"There are times he almost comes across as a mind reader because they don't REALLY communicate about intensity or the acts. He just does EXACTLY what she wants EVERYTIME. It's quite nonsensical overall"

This is another problem, because a common mistake in Manga is how problems would be easily solved with proper communication, and this author's "solution" is to basically make him as you pointed out a mind reader, and while it is possible to find the person who "gets you" I feel like the author using "magic", is not wholesome and is not the right type of eroticism for me either.
 
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The uneven nature of their progress makes it impossible for me to believe in this story, it just feels like is trying to cater to specific fetishes of the author with no regards for consistency and or continuity.

I feel like it also cast a negative light on the S&M community by showcasing these teens performing dangerous things like breath play and outright violent acts.
Plus this story has been going on for seven years, they shouldn't be acting awkward around each other
Yeah, agreed. It's still one of the better series depicting actual progress in a relationship and a lot of the BDSM stuff actually is quite healthy and good (especially when compared to literally any femdom manga). But, as I've noticed with a lot of female authors, she just cant help but take it a step too far and make it seem just a bit too dangerous or forceful. It's a common fantasy and it's fiction, so I kinda understand it. But I wish she would keep it safe and sane. She mostly does, but not always, unfortunately.
 

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