@Ghang Pretty good TLs. Not replacing the japanese words is fine as long as its translated somewhere. Like the scene in the infirmary, Ruu being happy that Tadapi chose her, and the train scene were all ok, it even helps some beginners learn some characters in my opinion.
Margins are pretty good so far, its one of those things that won't be noticed unless its bad, and I haven't had any trouble reading your text.
Thanks for the TLs, its pretty gud.