Tedama ni Toritai Kurokiya-san - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - I want to be chosen

[MangaDex]

 

[plsnobully]

5'11 is tall?

 

[WhimsiCat]

P R E C I O U S

 

[justforthelulz]

@Ghang
Font choices and typesetting seemed fine to me, no readability issues.

It might be worth mentioning in a note that the 'shiro' in 'Mashiro' means white, to contrast with 'kuro/black' in 'Kurokiya'.
And that her penname 'Ringo Shirayuki' means 'Apple White Snow' / 'Apple Snow White'.

@plsnobully
The average Japanese high school boy is 5'7'' (170cm), so yes, compared to his immediate peers, 5'11'' (181cm) is considered 'tall'.

 

[plsnobully]

@justforthelulz I see

 

[Ghang]

@justforthelulz oh right. I had that written down in my doc but forgot about it LOL.
Thanks for mentioning it, though I'm too lazy to go back in and add some notes rn. Maybe one day~

EDIT: Also, thanks for the feedback on the fonts & typesetting.

 

[KiTA]

Wow, this is... meta.

 

[IronicWeeabo]

Damn, breaking the 4th wall on Chapter 3

 

[franky09]

Manbagi face

 

[Walter_vi_Britannia]

@plsnobully For Japanese people...probably.

 

[ProfileGuy]

This font is better than the 1st chapter. Idk if you changed it between chapter 2 and 3.

 

[Takaflame]

Great job man thanks!

 

[mcfucksauce]

author's self insert

 

[Ghang]

@CastleGuy I used the same font scheme for both chapters 2 and 3, since I did both of them today. Thanks for the feedback.

 

[boag]

An Otaku girl posing as a Gal.
This manga is precious!!!!

After Gal Gohan ended we need a new pure manga to fill in the void.

Spoiler

PLease dont turn into Gal Cleaning.

 

[aberdeus]

is that a self insert?

 

[anon_whos_not_a_fag]

>Me reading the author's name

 

[kowoyoshi]

Okay you got me, her friend got lots of points, actually like her lol, note: is every character going to subvert our expectations.

 

[BCS]

>He's not even 6'

DROPPED

 

[TanithG]

Lmao the self-insert, I love this. Thanks for the chapter!