@KittyBlue9
Some of the text is chopped
Page 1
Middle panel, Kai's dialogue, "So...this is mean moving to the frontier village?"
Page 2
Top panel, did the original text have Kai refer to himself moving to Tenohira using Relocation, or was it in general reference to anyone the ability was used on?
Last panel, Kai's speech bubble.
"So if you move there, you can't come back?" They're currently at Tenohira, so should be "So if you move here, you can't go back?"
Page 3
Kai again, "temporarily move there" should be "temporarily move here"
Page 5
Middle panel, previously you had Arthur say he creates other gods, but here you used "gives birth". "creates" makes more sense since...you know, he's not giving birth to them, he's bestowing power.