TenPuru - No one can live on loneliness - Vol. 3 Ch. 23 - Shot Arrow

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This series keeps getting better and better

Akagami is such a cool MC
 
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Loving akagami as an mc he's like a relatable dude down on his luck version of iori from GB
 
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you could just translate kyudo(弓道) as archery and kyudobu(弓道部) as archery club
うん should be translated as yea/yeah/yep/yes instead of um

page 6:
"confabulation" could just be translated as "delusion"

page 7:
this is what drives me to do kyudo => This makes me want to do archery again
panel 3 akagami: You just witnessed the fact that she's a muscle brain and she still sucks at sports! The fact that she did archery for more than a year and she's still so bad!

Page 10:
but it also completes me in a lot of way => but it's also really fulfilling
tsukuyo-san => I don't know why you put san here. older sibling never use san for siblings younger than them

Page 11:
this one this good one will always be in my mind => I was able to recall one thing

Page 17:
I still can't erase that you know => It still hasn't disappeared you know

Page 18:
eye => eyes

Page 21:
thank yo- => thanks
 
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So. I saw the update and waited till I was off work *cough cough* now why won't the chapter load :/
 
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Dosanko gyaru used to be my favorite but this has shot pass it and has become my no.1 with very likeable MC and quirky and lovely female cast. Can't wait for more!
 
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wait till she found out akagami propose to yuzuki 2 times already and yuzuki is his first love. Its gonna be fun
 
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"Arigato" apparently doesn't exist in this girl's vocabulary. Returning kindness with drawing on his face with permanent marker. Yare yare.

But, she's just tsundere, ya know? Naw. Fuck that.
 
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Harem ending is greatly needed. Why pick between Tsukuyo or Mia when we can have both?
 

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