you could just translate kyudo(弓道) as archery and kyudobu(弓道部) as archery club
うん should be translated as yea/yeah/yep/yes instead of um
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"confabulation" could just be translated as "delusion"
page 7:
this is what drives me to do kyudo => This makes me want to do archery again
panel 3 akagami: You just witnessed the fact that she's a muscle brain and she still sucks at sports! The fact that she did archery for more than a year and she's still so bad!
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but it also completes me in a lot of way => but it's also really fulfilling
tsukuyo-san => I don't know why you put san here. older sibling never use san for siblings younger than them
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this one this good one will always be in my mind => I was able to recall one thing
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I still can't erase that you know => It still hasn't disappeared you know
Dosanko gyaru used to be my favorite but this has shot pass it and has become my no.1 with very likeable MC and quirky and lovely female cast. Can't wait for more!