It's like... I can see so clearly, it seems, what this manga was exactly supposed to be like!—both moment-to-moment and in general—and that hypothetical manga is great! ...But the real thing regularly fumbles the execution with egregiously trite, ham-handed, and/or cringey stuff. If nobody spoke and a narrator handled everything without getting quite so far into the details, this manga could be excellent, it just about feels like. XD
Still, even like this, the concept and overarching plot are good fun, and the characters are all pleasant when they're not saying cringey things...
IMO, the scanlators seem completely on-point in claiming this is the sort of thing that you keep calling out the myriad flaws of, yet still keep reading.