Tensei Saki ga Zannen Ouji Datta Ken: Ima wa Fukkin 1-kai mo Dekinai kedo Yasete Isekai Sukuimasu - Vol. 3 Ch. 12

[MangaDex]

 

[Js1a231]

well you can improve your translation combining many translator machine or you could use like GPT for better translation or making the conversation more make sense

 

[Elhao]

A lot of confusion about who's talking to whom about whom going on. The pronouns are all over the place and the further down the chapter we go the less sense it makes.

 

[phorx]

Thanks for picking this one up.

 

[KuroViLolitannia]

I think you might confuse on who is talking to who sometimes.

Using "you" when a character talks about him/ herself for example. Might need a bit more QC ing from another translator.

Thanks for the work tho!

Btw the king and queen is full of Onee-Shota feeling lol.

 

[Belkin]

I ain't picky, I just want more of the story. Keep it up translator

 

[ia_zero]

thanks for the translation.

time to start babies making for the sake of the whole country.

 

[Maverun]

Thanks for chapter!

King is not what I was expecting,I thought more of bearded buff guy lol

 

[Helitrix]

thanks for picking it up , aside from every ones notes, its also best to read the chapter after TS and see if it makes sense or not to you as well.

 

[Essidus]

Thanks for picking it up! While I agree that the translation is a bit rough, this will be a great way to practice and improve

 

[RandomGuy2307]

As other said, there is room for improvement, especially when it comes to the pronouns.

 

[Miserys_End]

Cheers for the translations and all your hard work!

As others have said, it almost feels like people were speaking someone else's part at times. Other times a statement felt slightly garbled.

Overall still passable, bit could use some improvements. Keep practicing at working those LLMs. The better you get at manipulating them, the easier it will become to get the output you're wanting.

 

[anak_sampah]

Hmm, thank you for picking this up.

Like many other said, I suggest you combine at least google translate (for accuracy) and chatgpt (for making sense) together when translating. Also, about the names, better follow the previous chapter.

All in all, quite nice, keep it up.

 

[xaraphina]

A lot of confusion about who's talking to whom about whom going on. The pronouns are all over the place and the further down the chapter we go the less sense it makes.

Japanese people rarely use pronouns, even paid translators do a terrible job since they’re inferring based on a name/position and/or don’t care. People don’t appreciate the effort put into all the “trivial“ annoyances some of these poorly written manga present.

 

[OneSpeed]

There's a webnovel translation you can use as reference for the translation on novelupdates, It was dropped at some point but should be useful for several more chapters.

 

[larcek]

please grab a proof reader, or just let somebody read it over once or twice to get the grammar or even just the correct sentences in their respective bubbles right. good attempt, but it was a hard read, because while it was good english, it just often failed to work in the existing context.

 

[Trodsen]

around the time they started talking with the king it felt like it got a lot more confusing than it was beforehand, it definitely can be improved a bit

 

[TripolarFandom26]

Thank you all for the comments! I know I have work to improve one, especially since this is my first translation. I will definetly take your suggestions and use them!

 

[Hikineet]

Thanks for the chapter.

 

[rizalma]

Again, thanks for the translation