Tensei Shitara Heishi Datta?! - Akai Shinigami to Yobareta Otoko - Ch. 1

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it looks good but it doesn't make any sense. i don't know what is going on right now can someone please tell me?
 
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I can’t understand shit and I’m confused as hell on what makes this an isekai
But interesting
 
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This is a piece of shit. Stuff happens for no reason, art is bad, and the author certainly has absolutely no sense for money.
 
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Chapter 1 failed to convey why this needed to be an isekai.

Also artist must hate backgrounds coz characters occupy most of the space in panels.
 
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Think it's fine at it is, fairly good start for an isekai.

Not like the guy need to self narrates for 10+ pages on how his previous life goes and how he dies...
 
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Hmmm... million dollar (un-enchanted?) spears, a warrior society fighting oversized opponents that doesn’t know about the achilles tendon( and presumably hamstringing as well) ... despite the elaboration, the world building’s off to a rough start
 
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Wow, the Ranks are all over the place...
So a Sergeant commands a Platoon, which is 3 Squads... one Squad is commanded by a Corporal, which would be a rank lower then Sergeant, so it makes sense, but then another is also commanded by a Sergeant and weirdly enough the last one by a captain, which is an Officer and like... 5 or so ranks higher then a Sergeant

(Dont even mention the dumb Yen-conversion... xD but thats just isekai-standard by now :D)
 

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