Tensei Shitara Slime Datta Ken - Vol. 3 Ch. 14 - The Ogre's Story

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awesome, thanks for fixing the lower quality releases! and also be sure to check out the /r/TenseiSlime discord server https://discord.gg/f3qWtkr
 
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Thanks so much for this! The normal Tenseisha releases are distracting to read. Your fixes are a much needed improvement!
 
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@bao - more to re:edit...

p7-2 - Ranga instead of Range (regular spellcheck can't help this)
p24-2 - "We'll charge willingly..." or "We're willing to charge..." instead of "We'll willing charge (into the frontlines...)"
p26-1 - "Understood, ..." instead of "I know, ..." (?)
 

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@infocam Thanks as always. I really appreciate it. As for the "I know" bit. Yeah, I can see how that is confusing, haha. The original idea was to convey that Rimuru had an idea. I didn't even read it in the context of the conversation which ultimately made it sound like a weird reply. I ended up just being direct and simply had him say that he has an idea.
 
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@bao Then in that case, "I got it" also works as well (in addition to my first suggestion)...wait...

*looks at page(s) in question*

Now that I look at the (current version of the) entire conversation chain properly as well, Rimuru has not yet answered back with the acknowledgement of Benimaru's choice if he now says "I have an idea..."


edit - now I'm interested on what was being said in the original raw.
 

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