I like this one more than the first winner, this is a much smoother reading. But I understand from business perspective, the winner is more likely to be profitable than this. Like how the art is better and having a central girl which merchandise can be made as well as potentially adding more girls that are also merchandisable. The other manga is also much easier to self insert, something the Japanese really love.
But this is smooth comfy reading. It could stand to be a permanent title at the back of the magazine but not really profitable. The girls are hilarious, they work very well but they don't "seduce" the reader. Even more so since this is Young Magazine, sex appeal is their selling point, freaking covers almost always a gravure.
I really want more chapters of this, goddamn it. I'm tired of sexy stuff. This is really good shit.