@Takashinagi Thank you so much for continuing the translation of this series 😍
If I can help you a little to make this chapter easier to read (please note that I don't know japanese at all):
- On page 2 the bear should say: "Who the hell are you?";
- On page 6, panel 4 I think Yuan should say "you're bleeding!", or "You're hurt!"
I don't think the translation is bad, for being only your 5th work I would say it's awesome 😊
Well, I've never done japanese to english translation since I can't read it, but I think people that just complain about the translation should at least write a couple examples of what is wrong or what could be written better instead of just complaining. Please don't feel demotivated by them! 😉