@Minar It's not really bad, I just had to reread them two or three times to figure out what they were talking about.
The ones that stand out in particular are Binz' 5th and 7th bubbles on page 2, where it's not very clear what meetings he's talking about or what "the accumulation of the king's job" is. Then the last two bubbles from the elder are phrased in a strange way, although I'm sure that will be cleared up in the next section once we can see what they actually do because of what he said. It sounds like he's saying that the consorts who "passed" will not receive visits from the king anymore while the ones who "failed" won't be told anything, and I think that's not quite right? For all I know that is accurate, I think he just uses a lot of words he doesn't have to which makes it harder to break down.
Then again, that might be intentional seeing as it's a formal meeting and he would be using formal speech. So like I said, not bad, those were simply the bits I struggled with that could be considered later. Thank you for working hard on these translations!