The Archmage's Restaurant - Ch. 28

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I really hate this stereotype. Not talking about his personality but as an antagonist. It is lazy and just exist to get a rise out of the reader. Just like using rape as shock value with out any depth.
 
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Damn, hoped I was correct with me prediction last chapter, but looks like I was indeed correct… fat bastard was even worse than I predicted…
 
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While I'm enjoying this series either way, this chapter just convinced me they do not have nearly enough focus on Rurin and that should be fixed ASAP. Just throw this bastard in jail the very next chapter and show us how Rurin cares for Ell or something.
 
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Honestly, I wouldn't mind if El takes a few chapters off while Rurin figures out how to at least get the restaurant running on her own, and also connecting with the townsfolk by helping them. The ingredients are there since El strained himself getting it all through the magic shop, and it would help her rely more on the regular customers.

She needs some character development time. Let her handle this.
 
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I hate using rape as shock to just piss off the reader and make a 1 dimensional villian.
 

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