Dear Wizard Scans, thanks for the latest instalment!
A wordy troublesome chapter, but things are good for the most part, well done. Although, mind if I draw your attentions to a few places?
Page 2, 4th panel
https://mangadex.org/chapter/b0d264d1-d9e4-4edd-8d51-072f74629184/2
Since this scene likely took place soon after Cyril's escape but long before Demi witnesses his death over a year later, the いなくなって here is likely simply "gone away" and not "dead-gone away". Maxim still thinking Cyril is alive in the present supports this. Thus:
"Aren't you lonely... without your younger brother around?"
Page 42, last panel
https://mangadex.org/chapter/b0d264d1-d9e4-4edd-8d51-072f74629184/42
The surrounding syntax could be confusing, but I believe 居心地 isn't about this Ramus Squad being "secure", but that it's "comfortable" or "feels like home".
https://mangadex.org/chapter/b0d264d1-d9e4-4edd-8d51-072f74629184/37
I note this because 居心地 was just used by Demi on
Page 37 1st panel, about how even though a place entirely to your favour/convenience exists, you can still look for somewhere that's "comfortable/homely" (ie a place to call home if you will).
Hence pages later:
"It's because of you... this squad is becoming like home (to me)."
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Onto my own comments
This month Ch 27 came out, and overall The Land of Slaves arc had not disappoint.
Furthermore, Ch 18 is the slowest part of the whole arc, so from here on things will start accelerating again. The ride ahead gets fun.
Demi's a lady.
https://mangadex.org/chapter/beff86df-1950-4dc2-82df-ff9bf0a7ea1e/27
It's subtle, but for how aloof Demi is, she's always struck me as someone who has it in her to look after others (but Poppy gets on her bad side)
And seeing as she's the de-facto deputy to Lucas, I got the feeling all the times they've worked together has her steadily approving of his position.
So when this chapter first came out with her as the focus, I was glad I was on the right track. Though I thought she was a thief and not a slave farmer before the Pope recruited her