The Cave Man - Vol. 1 Ch. 3 - A Promise

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I agree with the other commenters. Writing in general is not too strong. i
I'm sure terrified kids wouldnt sleep that easily all at once, but i am curious where it goes so ill keep reading!
 
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So either they all retarded and didn’t sent someone to keep watch, something in the air affecting their judgement or it’s all a ploy in an attempt to grab the monster. Pretty sure the first guy is Faking it anyway.
 
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Has anyone played any of those old rpgmaker games like ao oni or the witches' house? I am seriously getting those vibes.

It's a weak excuse, but they could just be sleeping from the massive physical and mental fatigue. Hiking can take a lot out of you if you aren't physically active, and they did fall into a large trash hole. I

I have no excuse how that one guy is not screaming in pain from dislocating his arm, or how everyone can seemingly ignore a pile of children's backpack.
 

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