This was really great, looking forward to more!
One note on the translation (though I haven't actually read the raws) -- on page 14, where the manager is introduced, there's a line that says "5 penalties." This probably comes from バツ5, which actually means he's been divorced 5 times. That バツ isn't 罰 but rather ✖, or at least that's my guess.
Source: https://www.sugoren.com/search/バツイチ
(copied from reddit...)