The Dark Brown Editor and the Shota Mangaka

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ahh ok I understand. Its true that in the Us is different to how's it here in Europe. Btw for it to be your third language your English is amazing
 
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Same overly flirty onee-san, same overly prude mc. This is boring.
 
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NOT THE NEE-CHAN! My assumption is she's a closet pervert, who's kinda tsundere-y? idk that's what I got from her character
 
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Dammit now its cliffhanger what kind of his sister is...?.. Wow her sister is cute..
 
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sometimes i wonder with these ecchi manga: what's the point? like, why not just read doujinshi? what does this do for people that straight up porn doesn't ?
 
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It's completely strange how inconsistent this story is. On the one hand, the motive of the characters is to have a serious business running as mangaka and editor, on the other hand both of them do the exact opposite, they engage in acts that hinder the process of writing up a good story and drawing it.

I guess soon they'll bring in the "assistant" that's going to be another girl, and it will turn into some relationship drama to justify running longer than the premise would allow it to normally.

Another thing bothering me is that there is not a speck of chemistry between the characters. None of them is trying to understand the other party, and their dialogues are going past each other into the void.
If you ask me, it's the story of "pervert exhibitionist meeting high school hikkikomori", and if they changed the character design a bit and set up the background story for that, it could actually be an interesting story about one who wants to be seen and noticed in her natural way and one who wants to disappear from the world because he cannot stand to be seen by others.
 
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Hello, are you going to update it? because i see that there are more chapters, I saw them on a page in Japanese
https://manga1001.com/【第4話】褐色編集さんとショタ漫画家-raw/ (Sorry for my English)
 

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