The Exiled Hero
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Actually, isn't the "Exiled from the Party" genre a lot more satisfying when the protagonist was great from the start, and their old party just didn't realize it?
If the protagonist gets a random power-up the day after being thrown out, that's just luck, isn't it?
Like if I were fired and then I won $100 000 000 on the lottery next day, it's nice, but not really relatable.
That kind of event is better in a "Betrayed by the Party" scenario, where you were about to be killed as they threw you to the monsters, but a fluke upset their sinister plan and gave you the power to fight back against certain doom. There, the point is the revenge, a fantasy where the bad guy loses for once.
If the protagonist gets a random power-up the day after being thrown out, that's just luck, isn't it?
Like if I were fired and then I won $100 000 000 on the lottery next day, it's nice, but not really relatable.
That kind of event is better in a "Betrayed by the Party" scenario, where you were about to be killed as they threw you to the monsters, but a fluke upset their sinister plan and gave you the power to fight back against certain doom. There, the point is the revenge, a fantasy where the bad guy loses for once.
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You pretty much nailed it.
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This just isn't very good. The story is full of dumbass characters that are hostile to the main character for no other reason than the story needing them to be, gotta make him the underdog after all. Very sloppy writing with subpar translation making it more frustrating to read than it really needs to be.
Overall this is a 4/10, not the worst thing I've ever read, but the person who wrote the story should probably take a couple writing classes and try again in the future.
Overall this is a 4/10, not the worst thing I've ever read, but the person who wrote the story should probably take a couple writing classes and try again in the future.
The synopsis sounds good so I give it a chance. However, I am disappointed. First of all, from the synopsis, I thought MC will only use probability skill and rise to the top with that skill only. But MC proves that skill is not enough to beat stronger enemies. There's no clear explanation on that skill as well. I'm disappointed because the story start with MC making that skill sounds incredible.
MC also not the cautious type. He sounds so confident but when faced with unexpected enemies, he panic. He might be able to win but seriously I say that's plot armour. Other characters seem lack some common sense or not that helpful.
I also dislike how the story keeps rambling about species discrimination. I want to see how MC able to make his guild the best, basically battle between guild. Not the world-saving story.
MC also not the cautious type. He sounds so confident but when faced with unexpected enemies, he panic. He might be able to win but seriously I say that's plot armour. Other characters seem lack some common sense or not that helpful.
I also dislike how the story keeps rambling about species discrimination. I want to see how MC able to make his guild the best, basically battle between guild. Not the world-saving story.
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it's just okay prob around a 5.5/10 honestly there's no real point in the guild aspect the one he's in serves 0 purpose.
the money aspect just gets swept under the rug. there's basically 0 items btw.. I've seen 2 items this whole series which is a sword/a bow
so it's just the typical op power fantasy. except there's just to much drama.. but if with that there's no real time for the characters to build chemistry.
the Mc is just kinda boring he has this super op ability that let's him see the truths of reality. it's not like he struggles at all really but he essentially can see the future and doesn't act on it and would love to see his personality be more cocky and thought provoking
besides that its just endless human vs human/sub humans races I think they have cleared 2 monster areas ? sabertooth and a cockatrice dungeon.. that's all!
I thought it would be more like a Sim build manhwa where he would build up forces and what not but it's not and I'm kinda disappointed ngl
a pretty bad review cuz I'm really tired ffs
the money aspect just gets swept under the rug. there's basically 0 items btw.. I've seen 2 items this whole series which is a sword/a bow
so it's just the typical op power fantasy. except there's just to much drama.. but if with that there's no real time for the characters to build chemistry.
the Mc is just kinda boring he has this super op ability that let's him see the truths of reality. it's not like he struggles at all really but he essentially can see the future and doesn't act on it and would love to see his personality be more cocky and thought provoking
besides that its just endless human vs human/sub humans races I think they have cleared 2 monster areas ? sabertooth and a cockatrice dungeon.. that's all!
I thought it would be more like a Sim build manhwa where he would build up forces and what not but it's not and I'm kinda disappointed ngl
a pretty bad review cuz I'm really tired ffs
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